Monday, October 12, 2015

Poem about Holidays

The sun may be up but the rain might come down
Sometimes the faces may be happy and sometimes with a frown.
There is so many fun things to do for fun
It's mabye endless there is a ton.

A lot of children having fun
All the work the teachers have hoped we have done.
I have ate ice cream with a cone
And when we went home my cousin would call me on the phone.

I was playing the piano while I was waiting ( for school to come )
it was a long time it was taking.
when it was raining it felt chilly
sometimes my little cousins can be kind of silly.

When it was nearly the school days I was preparing
trying to change my plans and the time I was sparing.
It was starting to get hot
And while I was playing a catching game I got caught.

I wrote this to try and talk in a poem but also aboout my holidays. Thank You and hope holidays are fun.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Justin,
    Great effort at writing a holiday poem. Your rhyming is superb. Try to keep your rhythm the same in each phrase- a good way to do this is to count the syllables or beats. It was pleasant to read a recount in the form of a poem- nice job.
    Ms W

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