Then I met the learning coaches the building was new so there was no cockroaches,
There was lots of people can the classrooms keep all? (The learners)
Ten million people it felt like and there was some people riding a bike.
When we visited we walked and when we played we talked,
And there was a lot of friends Sometimes when we text we type and then press send,
In class we met and talked a little bit of ourselves and we did art the things are in the shelves,
The people I have seen and the their new uniforms were clean.
After time has past the learning we had done and we had lots of fun,
So new people have come and people from Baverstock I knew the people that have come,
It was time for lunch so it filled up our tum and after that we played to have fun,
And it comes to now we continue our journey and in the future we will learn and go to university.
I have wrote this because this is my first ever time to write a poem for my blog and when I continue I will try and make more poems. Thank you and come to OrmPS.
Hi Justin
ReplyDeleteWhat a great way to advertise the school with a poem! I like all the detail you have included. It would be good to include some more rhyming words at the end of sentences but you have tried this sometimes which is good. Were you really expecting cockroaches? Did they have them in your old school, or something?
Ms W.